Again, feedback would be appreciated. I especially need technical feedback, if any
Kama [5] ******
Armament; an intricate automaton at the pinnacle of ingenuity, designed in the shape of a menacing war-scythe. The blade and handle are black metal carrying eerie veins of red, with wooden grips at its butt and midpoint. It is designed for wide sweeping attacks, reaping fields of enemies as if they were wheat. (Because it is not sentient and cannot attack on its own, its THAC0 is converted to an appropriate bonus to attack rolls.).
HD: 5 (up to twice machinist level)
AC: 2 (½ HD)
Weight: 4* (HD^2 * 10)
Carrying Capacity: 2* (½ Weight)
*Original weight and carrying capacity are 250 and 125, respectively
Attack: 15 dmg (HD x 3), dealt by a scythe
Scythe = 15 dmg → Scythe (2d6 + 3)
Bonus to attack rolls: +4 (THAC0 for a 5HD creature is 6+)
Exploration Movement Rate: N/A
Combat Movement Rate: N/A
Special Abilities: 5 (one allowed per machinist level)
No ambulatory function (-1)
Need operator (-1)
Halve weight and carrying capacity (+1)
Halve weight and carrying capacity (+1)
Halve weight and carrying capacity (+1)
Halve weight and carrying capacity (+1)
Halve weight and carrying capacity (+1)
Halve weight and carrying capacity (+1)
Sweeping attacks at no penalty (+1)
Direct Design Cost: 35,000 gp ((2,000gp x HD) + (5,000gp x # of abilities))
Min. Research Library Value: 35,000 gp (+1 to proficiency throw for every 10,000 gp over that min.)
Design Time: 42 days (1 week + 1 day for each 1,000 of cost)
Design Penalty: +7 to target throw (+1 for every 5,000 gp of total cost)
Build Cost: 35,000 gp ((2,000gp x HD) + (5,000gp x # of abilities))
Min. Workshop Value: 35,000 gp (+1 to proficiency throw for every 10,000 gp over that min.)
*Material Quality Bonus: +1 to proficiency throw for every 10,000 gp worth of mats invested (cannot exceed base cost)
Build Time: 42 days (1 week + 1 day for each 1,000 of cost)
Build Penalty: +7 to target throw (+1 for every 5,000 gp of total cost)